Commonwealth sport Animation Rubric

Here is my mark that I think I deserve.I think I worked really hard on this term's Animation.next term my goal is to get a better mark.

Cross Country 2014

I’m so thankful that cross country is only once a year “keep running and don’t stop I told myself”.Mud squelched under my feet as I ran thru the reserve. I could feel my heart pounding against chest as I inhaled and exhaled.With a final burst of energy and effort I sprinted towards the finish line.YAY!!! everyone cheered.    

“Yes!” it is finally our turn to run”.”When” the year 5 boys got called out by Mr burt I felt nervous. when Mr burt said “on your marks get set GO” I felt confident of running.

OFF we go. while we were running I was feeling good. when I got to the middle of the reserve  It was really muddy and my feet felt all. I was breathing heavy.on the other hand I was thinking to myself to be pushed to the Limit.From afar I could see the finish from distance.With a final burst of Energy I ran 100%,sprinting across the field.then when we finished our amazing Cross Country Mr Burt finished with a PREY

came 9th place out of all the year 5 boy’s. But I was huffing and puffing  I was thinking to myself that I did really well with my cross country this year. I will try and build on It next year. I can’t Wait for next year to run. hopefully there can be more runners.

for athletics next term  I will try My hardest

this afternoon we are learning to be positive about ourselves.here is a  poem that I wrote about ME

Missing

it was all far too much effort for me id rather just lie around pigging out anyways when he said you cant catch me i believed him the last i saw of that ginger person he was talking to mr fox

It was all far too much effort for me I’d rather just lie around pigging out anyway. When he said you can’t catch me I believed him. The last I saw of that ginger person he was talking to Mr fox.

Bowl of rice

World's water running out - Punctuation

world leaders are gathering in washington today to discuss the worsening water crisis water may soon need to be rationed said us president amelia topp if we carry on wasting it there simply won’t be enough to go round

World leaders are gathering in Washington. “Today to Discuss the Worsening water Crisis, water may soon need to be rationed said us President” Amelia topp “if we carry on Wasting it there simply won’t be enough to go round”. Today my score was 5/16

Maria and Charlie

We read an article in a School Journal. We were learning to use parts of the text to help us answer questions accurately.

Africa

Have you been to the continent of Africa?Did you know that Malawi can speak in four different languages which is pretty cool.in africa there are 1.111 billion people how live in that whole continent ‘’WOW’’ that’s alot.Africa has the second highest population I’n the whole world  

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