Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.
The distinguished Omaru creek is sad because back in the days kids and adults was able to swim in the creek and the fishes were able roam free. But now people can't swim and the water is not clear it is green and paru. What can we do about it and how are we going to clean our Omaru creek?
Learning about our Omaru creek is a very good experience. and we should do something about like encouraging people to help us to clean the creek. So if you see someone chucking any rubbish in the creek tell them to pick up and put it in the bin.