Thursday, 10 November 2016

The fantasy tree

                                                     Once upon a time long ago at a old rusty farm there was a fantasy tree. This is no normal tree it’s a very special tree. More special than all the other trees surrounding it. The farmers call this tree the Fantasy Tree because that tree helps them grow kumara, potatoes, bananas and some special coconuts. “Ohh now I know why they call this the fantasy tree, now I know where to get my fresh kumaras and bananas from”. The good thing about this tree is that is attracts a lot of people's attention

But the sad thing is at least once a year these undercover ninjas try to cut and
steal this fantasy tree. The farmers a  sick of them trying to steal their tree but they have no option but to protect with all their heart. As night falls the ninjas will come in any minute now, as they are waiting all they can hear is the strong wind and the dogs barking. They can finally see the ninja about to approach them so they get ready to get into battle.

After 6 hours in battle, the war had finally came to an end a the farmers had won again, the happened again a they went thru the same situation over and over again. The farmer were so angry that the barricaded half the land.  

Until one day the farmers were fed up with the ninjas. So they came up with and idea with the ninjas which was a treety “ huhuh get it, treety “. so that night when the ninja would come again, once the farmers saw the ninjas the yelled at them and said “ Hey youse we need to talk to you for a minute”. So they put their weapon down and slowly walk over to each other. So, long story short they ended up making a treety for the ninjas to never ever try and steal the tree of fantasy. Then so they lived happy ever after. The END


Once upon a time long ago at a old rusty farm there was a fantasy tree. This is no normal tree it’s a very special tree. More special than all the other trees surrounding it. The farmers call this tree the Fantasy Tree because that tree helps them grow kumara, potatoes, bananas and some special coconuts. “Ohh now I know why they call this the fantasy tree, now I know where to get my fresh kumaras and bananas from”. The good thing about this tree is that is attracts a lot of people's attention

But the sad thing is at least once a year these undercover ninjas try to cut and
steal this fantasy tree. The farmers were sick of them trying to steal their tree but they have no option but to protect with all their heart. As night falls the ninjas will come in any minute now, as they are waiting all they can hear is the strong wind and the dogs barking. They can finally see the ninjas about to approach them so they get ready to get into battle.

After 6 hours in battle, the war had finally came to an end a the farmers had won again. this happened again a they went thru the same situation over and over again. The farmer were so angry that the barricaded half the land.  


Until one day the farmers were fed up with the ninjas. So they came up with and idea with the ninjas which was a treety. “ huhuh get it, treety . once the farmers saw the ninjas they yelled at them and said Hey youse we need to talk to you for a minute”. So they put their weapon down and slowly walk over to each other. So, long story short they ended up making a treety for the ninjas to never ever try and steal the tree of fantasy. Then so they lived happy ever after. The END


The highlighted paragraph is my edited one and my understanding of simple, compound and complex sentences
   

   





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