Thursday 22 October 2015

San Diego ZOO

Introduction Rubric
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HookMy introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
OrientationMy introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.My audience is clear what I am writing about.My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
talking about the zoo experience 
3. Body Paragraph 2
my experience exploring the zoo digitally
4. Body Paragraph 3
visiting one particular animal  at the San Diego zoo digital.
5. Conclusion
What I think about the San Diego Zoo
Visiting the zoo is super cool when you are doing it. Room 6 were lucky to visit the San Diego zoo on our Chromebooks this experience was awesome because we had to explore new and interesting animals. This virtual zoo experience was fun, Have you ever visited the zoo on the internet?

For this task we had to visit the zoo but digitally. It was fun because I got to learn about new animals. Hope you like my introduction and comment on my blog



       

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