“Oooooh and off goes the reigning champion Bolt with a very slow start”. Finally he has caught up to Justin Gatlin from behind. As Bolt caught up to Gatlin the race was unpredictable. Can Justin Gatlin finally beat Usain Bolt for the 2nd time in his running career?
Bolt looks he is gonna lose the 100m sprint in the 2012 London Olympics. Although Bolt is known as the fastest man in the world, Maybe in 2012 Olympics he can get proven that he is not the only fastest man in the world. As the race is going all the athletes are starting to give up, Now it is just Gatlin and Bolt.
They were coming down to the last 50m and Gatlin is still in the the lead.40m to go and every athlete is gonna use all their energy, 30m to go and Bolt is just losing. “ Ooh an out of nowhere Bolt is now in the lead with 20m left of the track. The reigning champion is back in the lead!!!. As bolt is running he can hear his coach Glen Mills shouting on the side saying “ Come on Bolt lets make your family and your country proud by bringing home a gold medal”.
Bolt is only 10m away from that nice and shiny gold medal but the other athletes have already given up.Usain bolt is already celebrating before he has finished his race in the 2012 olympics. Usain Bolt Has won his 2nd Gold medal of the 100m sprint. The Jamaican athlete has proved to the world that He is the fastest man in the WORLD!!!.
This writing is not true its a narrative writing
This writing is not true its a narrative writing
A great start Alfa! Good pace and use of language to evoke images of this competition. Check out the last sentence of paragraph one. Does this add to the story? If not remove :)
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